The Paragraph Of My Day Out Experience Class 1-5

My Day Out Experience

My Day Out Experience



On last Friday, I along with my family members and friends went to a picnic. We went to the river _______. We reached there at 10 a.m. The place is very charming. A strong wind was blowing there. I played there with my friends. Seniors were busy at cooking foods. After lunch we had a boat ride. It was very enjoyable. We also visited some houses on the sides of the river. We were charmed at the beauty of the riverside scenery. Really it was a great day out experience in my life.

Comments

  1. Too simple and not for class-1-5

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  2. U cn add some more things it looks like clss 1,2,3 not 5

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  3. I think it is good enough for class 3/4

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  4. I think it is good enough for class 3/4

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  5. It is very shot essay not for class 3,4

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  6. Please give me a easy paragraph on this topic

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